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BOOK 1 – SILENCE
Broadcasts, electronic frequencies, lifeless images sent out into the cosmos. The screens cast a chilling glow on the darkened room, silent images of death, horrors reminding the viewer of the utter degradation of humanity. In the darkness, one such screen flickered to life, and the silent observer raises the volume. A lone woman fills the majority of the image, one hand holding her earpiece whilst speaking as even toned as she could into the microphone she clutched desperately, her only ward from the horrors that her nervousness belied but the camera did not show. Behind her a bare concrete wall, a bunker perhaps, was visible. Although the microphone successfully concentrated her voice, the harsh popping in the background static implied gunfire.
“Bonjour, this is Georgette Armantté broadcasting live from
“As you can see the punctuated attacks over the past months have only been setting the stage for the open battle that is currently raging above. My crew and I are stationed in the center of the city, in a secure bunker. From the reports that we have received, it would seem that the conventionally superior Durenberger forces had successes in the morning, but as they swept through the city with their legendary armor division, the Iron Fist, they were gradually pushed to a standstill by the hit-and-run tactics of Schweitzer’s death’s hand corps. Although successfully occupying the core of the city, the line of battle has not been pushed any further, as the unconventional tactics have made continued occupation costly to the Durenberger militia.
“If you are a resident of
“Little is known about the situation with the Durenberger children, which stands as the central impetus to open war. From what we have been able to gather, early this morning all three children, despite living in three separate homes in central Berlin, were found missing and in each bed a death’s hand knife, the symbol of the Schweitzer militia, was stuck into the pillows. Although denying anything to do with the disappearances, Lord Wilhelm has proven uncooperative in the situation and completely unwilling to allow Durenberger forces to occupy his territory in an effort to find the children. Of course, the Durenbergers decided that this lack of cooperation is tantamount to guilt, but it is just as likely that Schweitzer was reluctant to let his borders be compromised because he likely interprets the kidnapping as a ploy to invoke moral outrage at his organization and build support for invasion of his lands, which comprise the majority of the Denmark peninsula.”
The image flickered again as more dust and debris shook loose from the ceiling, but this time something was different. The reporter looked away from the camera, somewhere behind and to the side of it. Beads of sweat rolled down her face, and yet petrified she still clutched to the microphone as if it could save her from the impending doom she felt so acutely. Faintly the sounds of metal forcing itself against metal grew more distinct in the background, and a moment later the image flashed completely white, and then was filled with smoke. Coughing into the microphone, the reporter strained to see what was coming into the room.
“Please, I’m non-partisan, a… a… member of the press. I have a right to be here.” Shakily she dropped the microphone and reached into a worn olive green satchel at her side. Pulling out a bundle of papers, “Please, look, I have papers, I have clearance from both Syndicates, I work for UBS-12 in
The image went dark. The silent figure brooded a moment in the darkness, and finally spoke. “Silence, Bludgeon, report.” The searing hiss of static and then faint electronic voices acknowledged the call.
2 comments:
Hi Adam,
Checking this out from your link on writersnet.
I don't usually read this genre (which is what, by the way?) but I am quite impressed with your writing. I think it needs redrafting, but it has a lot of potential.
One immediate thing I notice is the switching of tenses from present to past in the Intro. Haven't read beyond that but will add comments as I go.
Hey Sasha, thanks for the comment, hope you enjoy. I'm a bit lost myself for the genre, I originally classified it as horror, but have been told that horror is a dead literary form at the moment, so I'm dangling between sci-fi and dark fantasy. I think the latter describes it better, but is also a bit more specific and may have a harder time finding readership. What are your thoughts?
Thanks!
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